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Cornerstones's avatar

Hi everyone, thank you so much for your comments and votes. We've chosen a winner and will be in touch with them shortly. We loved reading everyone's entries and will hopefully do this again soon!

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Anna Harvey's avatar

When Celeste's date jumps off her office building after uploading a sex tape, she becomes entangled with a sinister AI.

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Kris's avatar

Love the plot*..... in the sense I can relate, I have geo locators tracking me & my crew on duty, managed by an AI bot.... We often joke, i.e. what if (?) that app goes stealth & migrates over to your personal stuff, mobile phone, video doorbell link, computer, digital watch, + + including friends & family just to keep track of us..... (go4it) well done....

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Anna Harvey's avatar

Thanks Kris :) It's not a big leap from fiction to reality with AI, and it's progressing so fast. I did a lot of research for the novel and found out some crazy stuff. This is the first novel in a series - that's how much material there is!

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Its not a big leap-so true Anna-... moving fast it is.... if you ever need a few short paragraphs of some of the funnier stuff to work into your content i.e. that happened to us on the tracking, risk management, weather models, security face ID, AI drones, booboo's, burps, poopoo's, software crashes & + stuff... I'd be glad to share, dont say it came from me, the software gurus & the € budget Ppl will get irritated, I'd probably get called in HQ & disciplined again. I'm at the infraction limit for this year, but they say that every year... I'm sure you got the sinister side covered.... for sure let me know when its published* #Fan

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Anna Harvey's avatar

Thanks - that's made my day! I'm just about to submit it to agents so fingers crossed :) I would be very interested to know your experiences if you want to share them, funny or otherwise. Not sure how we PM on here as I'm new to this platform.

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Amy FitzGerald's avatar

When Lily gets sent to Dreadmarsh - the school for magical misfits - will she finally be able to find her Hexcraft?

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Fil Reid's avatar

Too derivative of Harry Potter.

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Simon Bor's avatar

but the Potter idea was similar to The Worst Witch.

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Yvonne Radley's avatar

Mrs Mac and Joy are strangers who meet on the road, twenty minutes later they’ve killed a man. They run.

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Kris's avatar

Ya, there ya go...... that's a story setting the pace right outta the gate (from the start)......

in my dialect = read-in, grab-on & go 4da ride! ... #vryCoolYvon'

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Yvonne Radley's avatar

Thanks 🙏

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David Taplin's avatar

Man comes round from surgery finding he can talk with his pets. Transpires they’re smart enough to solve his problems.

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Martin Ross's avatar

A medieval minstrel who committed suicide gets another chance at life and pop stardom thanks to a time-travelling music mogul.

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Simon Bor's avatar

Love the idea, but not sure about the suicide angle.

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Kathy's avatar

On discovering that his beloved has been captured, a musically talented farmhand works with William Shakespeare to plot her rescue.

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Diane Horne's avatar

Sounds interesting. Are you missing a word? a musically (gifted?) farmhand.

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Kathy's avatar

Thanks for pointing that out, Diane. It should say ‘musically talented’! Thank you .

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Simon Bor's avatar

Love it that Shakespeare can plot rescues as well as plays.

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Elena's avatar

Lost in Paris, Lucy's friendship with Alessandro deepens into obsession—can she untangle her feelings without losing herself?

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Marion Dew's avatar

A happy family of six. Seventy years later, two surviving sisters know they could kill the other with three words.

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Catherine Randall's avatar

I'm really intrigued by this one!

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Becky Tavernor's avatar

Grieving her beloved mother, Isobel stumbles into another world, Isglair. Can she save Isglair and also the Earth?

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Reg Bull's avatar

I can write fluently, but my editing skills are so poor that I cannot capture anything in exactly twenty .....

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Kris's avatar

Reg... Go 4-it.... fear is good... fear with a bunch of cool writers & on a editors blog is better.

Its here to help.... Throw the 20... even snap shot phrases..... we're all waiting with baited breath.....

Theres no vampires here..... (hmm)(?)....... anyway.... its safe here....

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Martin Ross's avatar

Very funny. I like it!

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KAREN TAYLOR's avatar

While in coma, Pippa meets dead boy who returns back to earth to clear his fathers name of his murder

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Liz Gwinnell's avatar

They got lost in the thick, grey fog. The werewolf said he knew the way out. Should they trust him?

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Kris's avatar

Ya... I would trust him.... sometimes... rarely... they're not so bad, for a little while....

(but the smell... you can follow that in the fog #4sure)

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Cherloria's avatar

Capecoast Castle, had long been deserted and forgotten, but this weary traveller cares not, ghosts are better company then humans at times

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DJ Shaughnessy's avatar

Trapped with the president, his haughty daughter, an unhelpful ghost and ‘Hypnotism for Beginners’, a nerdy boy outwits their kidnappers.

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Eivind NERBERG's avatar

Man flees his repetitive existence . Faced with saving a woman's life there's only one problem - it's something he's done before.

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Eivind NERBERG's avatar

This is a dilemma faced by the hero of my novel The Man Who Would Do Nothing Twice. Thanks for liking.

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Lucy Banks's avatar

Speed dating is real hell. Then Karen meets Luke. However, there’s more to this handsome devil than meets the eye…

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Susan Fleming's avatar

I like the sound of this!

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Mai Black's avatar

At the knife edge of night and nightmare, I wait, my fish-eyes bulging with decay, my lips black with rot.

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Ramona's avatar

In Dubai, a wrong word or liaison lead to jail, and lawyer Zoe has been treading carefully – or has she?

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Joanna's avatar

A story about the fragility of friendship, the murky world of teenage sex, and the shame and secrecy that follows.

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Lucy Grace's avatar

1983: Landslide swallows Lynsey's brother, and best-friend. ‘Both dead’. ‘I never saw their bodies.’ 2023: she returns, upturning thirty-year-old secrets.

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Sam's avatar

Boy discovers digital clues suggesting missing dad isn’t dead, eventually leading him to save virtual civilisation from very real villain.

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Kristen Reinsel's avatar

Two sisters arrive in a mysterious world where they must battle a monster who feeds on anxiety, doubt and guilt.

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Seb's avatar

Espionage meets “the Furies”: Jessie must trust a ragtag team of ex-spies when searching for her half-sister uncovers a conspiracy.

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PJ Addams's avatar

A detective, after being possessed by his personified PTSD, must solve a murder to rule himself out as the killer.

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Simon Bor's avatar

Gethyn wakes with a new identity and helps Kat save the lives of an old friend and a multi-dimensional entity.

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Stephen Woodward's avatar

The Headless Horseman was speechless as the ghoulish nymphomaniac slowly removed the white sheet she had worn for Halloween.

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Martin Ross's avatar

Love this one!

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Diane Horne's avatar

Sounds hilarious, but we might need to a bit more of the plot.

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shazia's avatar

A young Bangladeshi woman, navigating love and cultural identity in New York, confronts unresolved desires, societal expectations, and complex friendships.

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Mark's avatar

Young couple rescues a runaway genetically engineered military prototype - and must protect him and everyone they love from his creators.

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Jason Mann's avatar

Amelia Tremayne returns to the crumbling, clifftop house where her father was killed - with one last chilling mystery to solve.

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Katherine Ewen's avatar

An Irish castle is crumbling. Its inhabitants with it. Eviction is looming and as more uninvited guests arrive chaos ensues.

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Catherine Randall's avatar

Dickensian London. Can Rosa save the zoo's bears from the bear-baiting ring, and rescue her bearkeeper father from debtors' prison?

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Maria C Henry's avatar

In saving the local ecosystem, average boy discovers what makes him extraordinary

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Katherine Baldwin's avatar

Broken-hearted woman escapes to Spain in a campervan and meets a man who challenges her to overcome her traumatic past

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Kris's avatar

Thats a rescue story* I'm all in with that*

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Katherine Baldwin's avatar

Thanks Kris 😊

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Jessica Wilkinson's avatar

A suffocated teenager goes against the grain of her perfect family and joins a seductive world of wicked witches.

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Jo Lindsay's avatar

Bea’s marriage is haunted by Lily, Paddy’s beloved sister – missing, presumed dead. Then Paddy is murdered. Could Lily be guilty?

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ELLEN CARNEGIE's avatar

Alex and Lucy fall in love. Lucy makes a mistake. Alex tries loving someone else. They get back together, forever?

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Simon Bor's avatar

What I like about this is that it's the synopsis in 20 words, and not just an idea or scene.

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David  Geey's avatar

The Rootless Tree, an alien city faces extinction. Only Hineni, smuggled to Earth as a child can save it.

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Jude Birdsall's avatar

Amy refuses to let the small matter of her boyfriend's death get in the way of her relationship with him.

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Cecilia Kang's avatar

Wow i had to go back and read that a second time. Nice

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Debbie's avatar

A magic stone, a missing Princess and someone who doesn’t want either to be found. Tammy has to find both.

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Cecilia Kang's avatar

Robyn wants a good life. She can see her future. So she gets to choose what to keep or change.

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Eric Ward's avatar

Domestic disturbance emergency. Wife dead, husband in ambulance, paramedic triggered. Needle, syringe: justice. Just like she’d done to her abuser.

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TB's avatar

King Arthur awakes from his earthbound slumber, embarking on a quest inextricably tied to the carving of a totem pole.

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Martin Ross's avatar

Love the idea of King Arthur being resurrected.

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Rachel's avatar

Trapped in a Dome after the apocalypse, a thief, an illegal and a psychic untangle the lies and seek freedom.

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David Johnson's avatar

A tap on my shoulder.

I spin round.

A disembodied hand hangs in mid-air, beckoning me into darkness.

I run.

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Diana M's avatar

‘Doing the right thing’ wrecks Jen’s love-life, but her guilty pleasure, K-Drama, shows her how to love and be loved.

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Madeleine Fowler's avatar

16 year old runs away to join the army- his nemesis also joins - promising torment in and beyond the trenches

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kellie's avatar

When successful author Emma struggles to complete her next book, Her Dissociative Identity Disorder -triggered -Introducing Helen -Who will survive?

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Sandi's avatar

Her twin’s shadow continually threatens her existence. Leaving her family and striking out could be her solution. Or her downfall.

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maurice vidowsky's avatar

He remembered his father in the asylum, but when he read the letters he realized he did actually love her.

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